Suspended Short Story

My piece is on the short story of the ones who walk away from the omelas. 

I used a lot of appetizing color that is described in the story, but I put on the inside. I wanted the outside to be glistening with disgust, while the inside tries to entice it’s admirers. It’s on of the reasons I incorporated the light inside, to catch the eye. I wanted to put it into the perspective of the citizens of the omelas, and give the choice whether the viewer wants to see the good side or the bad side.I tried also to make it appear fragile, something so big being held by something so tiny, representing the boy